HEROIC #1 - Unpublished Script

So as I promised on New Year's day, I am sharing the script I had written for the first issue of Heroic.

Please feel free to let me know your feelings about the script in the comments here. Note that there was meant to be a 6 page Epilogue that would have introduced three very important concepts to the Zenith Universe being presented;

1] Centropolis: A Virtual Reality/Matrix that is used for the storage of prisoners/undesirables whom the Watch have deemed a threat to their actions. This "city" would be very Golden Age in its presentation.

2] Doctor Walter Van Jove: A psychologist who is brought in to provide very important services and who would eventually become a very important character in the ongoing story.

3] The Brain Child/The Brain: This is why Dr. Van Jove is needed. A exceptionally powerful psychic discovered by the Nazis and liberated to America, he now exists as a brain in a jar as as a child avatar in Centropolis. His power level is nigh Godlike and with the creation of our protagonist from the story, has had enough and is about to enact his own schemes. Since I have got around to getting that written (far too many setbacks and delays) I share that with you now.

So there it is, take a read and let me know what you think of it.

You can find the script (sans Epilogue) here!

Cheers and thanks for your support!